Lets start with this example:
Today I went to a park. I rode my bike. I ate a cookie. I walked home. I drank water.
What? When? Why? Where?
With the “what”, let’s edit this.
Today I went to my favorite park and I enjoyed my time there. I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail. I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie. After, I walked home, whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water and read a book.
With the “when”, let’s edit this.
Today I went to my favorite park at three o’ clock and I enjoyed my time there. At half past three, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail. At four o’ clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie. After, at early evening, I walked home, whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o’ clock and read a book.
With the “why”, let’s edit this.
Today I went to my favorite park at three o’ clock because I wanted to get fresh air and I enjoyed my time there. At three ten, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail because why not? At four o’ clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie since I got hungry. After, at four five, I walked home, because I had enough fresh air and I was whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o’ clock and read a book because I felt in the mood to.
I already did the “where” part, so let’s skip that. Now read the story: Notice how it has detail?
Today I went to my favorite park at three o’ clock because I wanted to get fresh air and I enjoyed my time there. At three ten, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail because why not? At four o’ clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie because I got hungry. After, at four five, I walked home, because I had enough fresh air and I was whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o’ clock and read a book because I felt in the mood to.
