{"id":238,"date":"2021-10-08T01:21:53","date_gmt":"2021-10-08T01:21:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/yesrenee.com\/?p=238"},"modified":"2026-05-09T19:57:50","modified_gmt":"2026-05-09T19:57:50","slug":"to-write-a-detailed-paragraph","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/?p=238","title":{"rendered":"To Write a Detailed Paragraph"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Lets start with this example:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Today I went to a park. I rode my bike. I ate a cookie. I walked home. I drank water.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p> What? When? Why? Where?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>With the &#8220;what&#8221;, let&#8217;s edit this.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Today I went to my favorite park and I enjoyed my time there. I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail. I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie. After, I walked home, whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water and read a book.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>With the &#8220;when&#8221;, let&#8217;s edit this.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Today I went to my favorite park at three o&#8217; clock and I enjoyed my time there. At half past three, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail. At four o&#8217; clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie. After, at early evening, I walked home, whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o&#8217; clock and read a book.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>With the &#8220;why&#8221;, let&#8217;s edit this.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Today I went to my favorite park at three o&#8217; clock because I wanted to get fresh air and I enjoyed my time there. At three ten, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail because why not? At four o&#8217; clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie since I got hungry. After, at four five, I walked home, because I had enough fresh air and I was whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o&#8217; clock and read a book because I felt in the mood to.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I already did the &#8220;where&#8221; part, so let&#8217;s skip that. Now read the story: Notice how it has detail?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Today I went to my favorite park at three o&#8217; clock because I wanted to get fresh air and I enjoyed my time there. At three ten, I rode my bike across a rocky and bumpy trail because why not? At four o&#8217; clock, I ate a large peanut butter and raisin cookie because I got hungry. After, at four five, I walked home, because I had enough fresh air and I was whistling happily. I drank a nice cup or fresh water at five o&#8217; clock and read a book because I felt in the mood to.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Lets start with this example: Today I went to a park. I rode my bike. I ate a cookie. I walked home. I drank water. What? When? Why? Where? With the &#8220;what&#8221;, let&#8217;s edit this. Today I went to my favorite park and I enjoyed my time there. I rode my bike across a rocky [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-238","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-daily"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/238","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=238"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/238\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":327,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/238\/revisions\/327"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=238"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=238"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/yesrenee.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=238"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}